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Name (link of the blog): https://urberrys.blogspot.com/?m=1
Journalism Class: 
Topic: learning log meeting 1-15
Commentator: SIY, 2088203059, 6A2 
Assessing: 
- My learning
     language logs (of the meeting materials) 
 
Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10,
11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning language logs in sentences.
- My synopsis (of
     the meeting materials)
 
Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10,
11, 12, 13, and 14) of the synopsis in sentences.
- My Reflections
     (of the meeting materials)
 
Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10,
11, 12, 13, and 14) of the reflections in sentences.
- My learning
     strategies (of the meeting materials)
 
Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10,
11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning strategies in sentences.
- My news writings
     (articles) mechanics (Give the link of your friend’s news writing blog)
 
Elaborate
each element mechanic in sentences based on this table.
My news writings (articles) mechanics https://urberrys.blogspot.com/?m=1
| 
   Assessing Mechanics            | 
  
   Outstanding  | 
  
   Strong      | 
  
   Adequate  | 
  
   Minimal  | 
 
| 
   Spelling  | 
  
   For spelling she’s done well, I give her 90
  for score  | 
  
   | 
  ||
| 
   Grammar  | 
  
   | 
  
   | 
  
   For grammar still not enough but it must be getting great if she using
  application to check the correct grammar. I give her 78 for score  | 
  |
| 
   Punctuation/Mark  | 
  
   good i
  give her 90 for score  | 
  
   | 
  ||
| 
   Complete sentences  | 
  
   Very good in complete sentences I give her 90 for score  | 
  |||
| 
   Correct use of capitalization  | 
  
   Correct in use capitalization I give her 90
  for score  | 
  
   | 
  
My news writings (articles) contents https://goldielog.blogspot.com/
Elaborate
each element contents of news writing in sentences based on this table.
| 
   Assessing Ideas & Content of the
  News  | 
  
   Outstanding  | 
  
   Strong                | 
  
   Adequate  | 
  
   Minimal  | 
 
| 
   Well-stated topic sentence in the
  headline  | 
  
   Well good for the interesting topic, I’ll give her 90 for score   | 
  |||
| 
   Well-stated author in by line  | 
  
   Good way to write this topic, I’ll give her 80 for score   | 
  |||
| 
   Use a logical plan (4w+h) in the
  lead.  | 
  
   Always using this rules, good for her 95 for score  | 
  |||
| 
   Existed quotation with correct
  capitalization, grammar, & mark  | 
  
   good i
  give score her 85   | 
  |||
| 
   Well-ended with insightful messages
  to the viewers/readers  | 
  
   Still adequate, but good enough 79 for her score  | 
  |||
| 
   A pretty good flow of ideas from
  topic sentence to details in sequence  | 
  
   Good enough to flow the ideas, 85 for score  | 
  
 
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