Blog Buddies 1

 

Blog Buddies Journalism

PEER COMMENT FORM

 

Name (link of the blog): https://urberrys.blogspot.com/?m=1

Journalism Class: 

Topic: learning log meeting 1-15

Commentator: SIY, 2088203059, 6A2

 

Assessing: 

  • My learning language logs (of the meeting materials) 

Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning language logs in sentences.

 

  • My synopsis (of the meeting materials)

Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the synopsis in sentences.

 

  • My Reflections (of the meeting materials)

Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the reflections in sentences.

 

  • My learning strategies (of the meeting materials)

Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning strategies in sentences.

  • My news writings (articles) mechanics (Give the link of your friend’s news writing blog)

Elaborate each element mechanic in sentences based on this table.

 

My news writings (articles) mechanics https://urberrys.blogspot.com/?m=1

 

Assessing Mechanics         

Outstanding

Strong   

Adequate

Minimal

Spelling

For spelling she’s done well, I give her 90 for score

 

Grammar

 

 

For grammar still not enough but it must be getting great if she using application to check the correct grammar. I give her 78 for score

Punctuation/Mark

good i give her 90 for score

 

Complete sentences

Very good in complete sentences I give her 90 for score

Correct use of capitalization

Correct in use capitalization I give her 90 for score

 

 

My news writings (articles) contents https://goldielog.blogspot.com/

Elaborate each element contents of news writing in sentences based on this table.

 

Assessing Ideas & Content of the News

Outstanding

Strong             

Adequate

Minimal

Well-stated topic sentence in the headline

Well good for the interesting topic, I’ll give her 90 for score

Well-stated author in by line

Good way to write this topic, I’ll give her 80 for score

Use a logical plan (4w+h) in the lead.

Always using this rules, good for her 95 for score

Existed quotation with correct capitalization, grammar, & mark

good i give score her 85

Well-ended with insightful messages to the viewers/readers

Still adequate, but good enough 79 for her score

A pretty good flow of ideas from topic sentence to details in sequence

Good enough to flow the ideas, 85 for score

 

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