Blog Buddies Journalism
PEER COMMENT FORM
Name (link of the blog): madamwiw.blogspot.com
Journalism Class: 6A2
Topic: learning log meeting 1-15
Commentator: SIY/ 2088203059
Assessing:
- My
learning language logs (of the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning language logs in
sentences.
- My
synopsis (of the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the synopsis in sentences.
- My
Reflections (of the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the reflections in sentences.
- My
learning strategies (of the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting 1,2,3,4,5,6,
9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning strategies in sentences.
- My
news writings (articles) mechanics (Give the link of your friend’s news
writing blog)
Elaborate each element mechanic in sentences based on this table.
My news writings (articles) mechanics
madamwiw.blogspot.com
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Assessing Mechanics |
Outstanding |
Strong |
Adequate |
Minimal |
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Spelling |
You have demonstrated an excellent understanding of mechanics,
demonstrating accurate and precise spelling throughout your work. 90 for
score |
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Grammar |
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You
have demonstrated a reasonable understanding of grammatical rules and
structures in your writing. 78 for score |
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Punctuation/Mark |
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good i
give her 85 for score |
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Complete sentences |
Your
writing features perfect grammar, precise spelling, accurate punctuation and
well-structured sentences. 90 for score |
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Correct use of capitalization |
You
consistently capitalize where necessary, such as at the beginning of a
sentence, for proper nouns, and in titles. |
My news writings (articles) madamwiw.blogspot.com
Elaborate each element contents of news writing in sentences based on
this table.
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Assessing Ideas & Content of the News |
Outstanding |
Strong |
Adequate |
Minimal |
|
Well-stated topic sentence in the headline |
The
topic sentence in the title is strong and well stated. It effectively
captures the main idea of a news article in a concise and attention grabbing
manner. 80 for score |
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Well-stated author in by line |
The
byline adequately serves its purpose in acknowledging the author, but there
is room for improvement in providing more comprehensive information. |
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Use a logical plan (4w+h) in the lead. |
The
seamless integration of 4W+H into leads contributes to the overall coherence
and effectiveness of the news article, making it engaging and informative
from the start. |
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Existed quotation with correct capitalization, grammar, & mark |
Quotations
are accurately enclosed in quotation marks, and capitalization and grammar
are applied correctly, making it easy to identify and understand quoted
material. |
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Well-ended with insightful messages to the viewers/readers |
it
effectively conveys a deep message to the viewers/readers. The ending leaves
a lasting impression and offers a valuable conclusion for the viewer to
ponder. 79 for score |
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A pretty good flow of ideas from topic sentence to details in sequence |
The
writing follows a logical sequence, where each detail builds on the previous
one, creating a cohesive and well-structured work. 85 for score |
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