MEET 10: An example of a feature story in news writing and its analysis and feedback

 

Name: Syabiila Sanjaya Putri

Nim:    2088203059

MEET 10: An example of a feature story in news writing and its analysis and feedback

 

 

A.    LEARNING LOG

 

Number of the meeting task	Topic of the meeting	Source	Vocabulary Usage (New vocabulary words or phrase encountered during the session material)	Example taken from the text	Grammar
Meet 10	An example of a feature story in news writing and its analysis and feedback	Lecturer’s note	Courtesy: kesopanan (noun)  E.g."he had been treated with a degree of courtesy not far short of deference"	Do not use courtesy titles such as Mr., Mrs., Miss or Ms. unlessthey are part of a direct quotation or are needed to differentiate between people who have the same last name.	Imperative sentence
			Cue: isyarat (object) E.g."Mark cued well early on"	If the street name or directional cue is used without a numbered address, it should be capitalized and spelled out.	Present tense
			Abbreviation: singkatan (object) E.g."SKU is abbreviation for stock keeping unit"	How human-interest elements add depth and relatability to news	Noun phrase
			Colleagues=rekan kerja-noun-a person with whom one works in a profession or business.- Consider feedback from colleagues or editors and make necessary changes.	Some widely known abbreviations are required in certain situations, while others are acceptablebut not required in some contexts.	Complex sentence.
			Resist: melawan (verb) E.g."antibodies help us to resist infection"	Journalists should resist using dramatic or emotional language.	Declarative phrase

 

 

B.    REFLECTION

II've learned from the discussion of writing and evaluating news stories that a news story is a comprehensive narrative of an occurrence. The framework utilized in news features writing, which follows the standard news writing structure using an inverted pyramid writing style for news reporting, has proven to be the most beneficial to me. I now understand that crucial information appears at the top of the news and irrelevant information appears at the bottom of the narrative after reading the information about news features. This lesson teaches us that organizing information from crucial to irrelevant without affecting the news and making it easy for editors to summarize the news is necessary for a news report.  the text's body and conclusion.

 

C.    SUMMARY

According to the lecture’s explanation and lecture note in their article titled “An example of a feature story in news writing and its analysis and feedback,” it was stated that The Jakarta Post lists six must-try noodle joints in Bandung, West Java, including Kedai Wanmin's deep, rich-brothed bowl of 'niu rou mian' (beef noodle), Rumah Makan Linggarja's beef soup with wheat flour noodles, and Kedai Wanmin Jl. Semar's beef soup with wheat flour noodles and spicy and sour soup with sweet potato noodles. The news writing style analysis criteria rubric rates the feature story about the six must-try noodle shops in Bandung as good. Although it includes six must-try noodle restaurants, the title may be more interesting.